Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on After Failing to Influence the Protagonist
"After Failing to Influence the Protagonist" is a wild ride of a web novel, and I have to admit, I'm still sorting out my feelings about it. With elements of action, fantasy, and even a dash of shounen ai, it's a story that definitely keeps you on your toes.
First Impressions
Initially, I was drawn in by the premise: a protagonist trying to change the course of a novel's original plot. The idea of a character grappling with predestined roles and struggling against fate is always compelling. The early chapters definitely hooked me with the chaotic energy of Pei Jing and his relationships.
What Works Well
One of the strongest aspects of this novel is the dynamic between Pei Jing and his friends. I found their interactions hilarious and heartwarming, and I was genuinely invested in their bonds. The author does a good job of portraying Pei Jing as a morally gray character, not always perfect, but ultimately trying to do the right thing, which makes him feel more relatable and human. This complexity made me root for him, even when he stumbled. The mystery surrounding Chu Junyu, the male lead, also kept me engaged, particularly the exploration of his past trauma and cynical outlook. Seeing their relationship develop, with Pei Jing's carefree attitude balancing Chu Junyu's darkness, was a definite highlight.
Areas of Concern
⚠️ Spoiler Warning:
While I enjoyed many aspects of the story, I also had some reservations. Like some readers, I felt that the ending felt rushed, and the final battle didn't quite live up to the build-up. Specifically, the handling of Ji Wuyou’s character arc felt a bit underdeveloped. I also wasn't entirely convinced by Pei Yuzhi's attempts to "reform" him, as it felt somewhat insincere.
Final Verdict
Despite its flaws, "After Failing to Influence the Protagonist" is a unique and engaging read. The complex characters, intriguing plot, and comedic undertones make it a worthwhile experience. While the ending could have been stronger, the journey itself is filled with enough twists, turns, and heartwarming moments to keep you invested. I'd recommend it to anyone looking for a web novel with a morally ambiguous protagonist, a compelling romance, and a healthy dose of chaos.
