Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on Immortal Becomes a Stay-at-home Dad After Return
"Immortal Becomes a Stay-at-home Dad After Return" is a web novel with a premise that immediately grabbed my attention: a powerful immortal returns to Earth after 500 years to find he's a dad. It blends xianxia elements with slice-of-life, and while it has its charms, it's also not without its flaws.
First Impressions
Initially, I was drawn in by the concept of an OP protagonist navigating the mundane world of childcare. The idea of a powerful cultivator dealing with everyday family life seemed like a fun twist on the typical xianxia formula. There's a definite appeal to the doting parent angle, and the early chapters focus on the MC's attempts to reconnect with his daughter.
What Works Well
The moments of family interaction are definitely a highlight. The story shines when it focuses on the MC's relationship with his daughter and his attempts to create a loving home. Some readers found the children believable, and the wife's story added an interesting layer of depth to the narrative. The MC's maturity, compared to the often bloodthirsty protagonists in similar genres, is a refreshing change.
Areas of Concern
However, the novel does stumble in several areas. The pacing can be incredibly slow, with some chapters feeling like they lack significant plot progression. The author sometimes gets bogged down in excessive detail, which can detract from the overall reading experience.
Some readers have also raised concerns about potential biases, with claims of the story promoting certain cultural viewpoints and disrespecting others. While some may not view this as an issue, it is important to be aware of these elements.
⚠️ Spoiler Warning
Some reviewers mentioned significant plot points, so proceed with caution! Apparently, there's a misunderstanding regarding the MC's disappearance, which is resolved quickly. The wife's backstory involves a hidden sect and a sacrifice, which explains her initial absence. Also, the story shifts from family interactions to fights and beings from other worlds, which may not appeal to readers who are primarily interested in the slice-of-life aspects.
Final Verdict
"Immortal Becomes a Stay-at-home Dad After Return" is a mixed bag. While the premise and family-centric moments offer genuine appeal, the slow pacing, potential biases, and shifts in focus can be drawbacks. If you're looking for a lighthearted story with a unique twist and don't mind some flaws, this might be worth a try. Otherwise, proceed with caution. I'd give it a tentative 3/5 stars.
