Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on What Happens If You Saved A High School Girl Who Was About To Jump Off?
"What Happens If You Saved A High School Girl Who Was About To Jump Off?" is a web novel that certainly evokes strong reactions. I went in expecting a sweet, heartwarming story, and while there are elements of that, I found myself wrestling with some significant issues.
First Impressions
The premise is undeniably intriguing: a high school boy, Yuuki, saves a girl, Hatsushiro, from committing suicide, and the story follows their developing relationship. I was initially drawn in by the potential for a touching exploration of trauma and healing through romance. The early chapters had a certain charm, and I appreciated the focus on character development.
What Works Well
Many readers praised the sweet interactions between Yuuki and Hatsushiro, describing them as heart-melting. There's a definite emphasis on the human drama, delving into Hatsushiro's reasons for her despair and the slow, gradual process of her healing. I can see why some readers found the characters realistic and relatable. The novel aims to be more than just a fluffy romance, attempting to tackle some serious themes.
Areas of Concern
However, the novel stumbles significantly in its handling of those themes. Several readers, myself included, found the protagonist's actions and the overall plot progression to be unrealistic and, at times, deeply unsettling. The way the novel portrays suicidal tendencies and domestic violence felt glossed over and even romanticized by some. The lack of immediate professional intervention for Hatsushiro's obvious trauma is a major sticking point.
⚠️ Spoiler Warning
The events surrounding Hatsushiro's father are particularly problematic. The sudden forgiveness and the way the situation is resolved feel rushed and unearned. The extent of her injuries and the lack of proper medical attention raise serious questions about the story's internal consistency.
Final Verdict
Ultimately, "What Happens If You Saved A High School Girl Who Was About To Jump Off?" is a mixed bag. While the initial premise and some character interactions have appeal, the novel's handling of sensitive topics and its reliance on unrealistic plot devices left me feeling deeply uncomfortable. If you're looking for a lighthearted romance, this isn't it. Proceed with caution, and be aware of the potentially triggering content.
