Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on In Order to Support Me, Big Shots Kneels Down Before Me!
"In Order to Support Me, Big Shots Kneels Down Before Me!" is a completed original web novel with an ongoing translation. It mixes comedy, josei, romance, and slice of life with tags like adopted protagonist, mistaken identity, and reincarnation. After diving in, here's what I think.
First Impressions
My initial impression mirrored some of the early reactions I've seen. The opening chapters felt a bit rushed, and I found myself questioning the pacing. I wasn't immediately sold on the characters, and the dialogue felt a little…rough around the edges. It felt like the story was pushing hard to establish its core premise, and that urgency might have been detrimental to the initial flow.
What Works Well
Despite some of my reservations, the romance elements are undeniably the strongest part of this story. Even though, at times, the characters felt a bit bland, the cute moments between the leads managed to shine through. I think the late romance tag is accurate; the slow burn and eventual payoff are probably what kept many readers engaged despite other shortcomings. The premise itself – big shots kneeling to support the MC – has a certain comedic appeal that, when executed well, can be quite entertaining.
Areas of Concern
While the premise is intriguing, execution is key, and I found myself agreeing with some criticisms about the overall plot and character development. Several plot points felt underdeveloped, and the antagonists came across as generic and uninspired. The female lead, while intended to be charming, sometimes veered into Mary Sue territory, which can be off-putting. The dialogue could also use some polishing to feel more natural and less forced.
Final Verdict
"In Order to Support Me, Big Shots Kneels Down Before Me!" has potential, especially if you're looking for a lighthearted romance with a unique premise. However, it's important to go in with tempered expectations. While the romance provides some enjoyable moments, the story suffers from underdeveloped characters, plot holes, and somewhat amateurish writing. If you can overlook these flaws and appreciate the cute moments, you might find it a worthwhile read. Otherwise, it might be best to proceed with caution.
