Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on Diary of Raising a Mermaid
"Diary of Raising a Mermaid" certainly swam its way into my attention, and after diving in, I have some thoughts! It's a novel with a unique premise and a blend of genres that mostly works, though it's not without its flaws.
First Impressions
The initial chapters definitely hooked me. The idea of a cute, slightly scheming protagonist raising a mermaid, particularly one with tentacled appendages, is undeniably intriguing. I was immediately drawn to the MC's personality; he's not just a passive caregiver but a character with his own motivations and a bit of a mischievous streak.
What Works Well
The world-building, with its touches of human experimentation and mythical creatures, creates a compelling backdrop. I particularly enjoyed the dynamic between the MC and ML. While some might find the ML falling in love quickly, I thought it was acceptable, given the circumstances. The side characters, like Little Orca and Tiny Octopus Friend, also added to the charm. I especially appreciated how the villains were written. They weren't just cardboard cutouts of evil; they had their own motivations and even moments of redemption, which felt refreshing.
Areas of Concern
While I enjoyed the overall story, the romance between the MC and ML felt a little underdeveloped. It was there, but I didn't find it as captivating as other aspects of the novel. Also, the ending felt a tad abrupt, leaving me wanting a bit more closure.
⚠️ Spoiler Warning
Okay, here comes a minor spoiler! One of the villains, Muran, the head scientist, actually has a bottom line and doesn't betray the MC after being saved. I found this to be a surprisingly nuanced touch. Also, the villain Michael has a whole arc where he marries a rich doctor and has to confront his past. His brother even sacrifices himself for Michael!
Final Verdict
Overall, "Diary of Raising a Mermaid" is an enjoyable read, especially if you're looking for something cute with a touch of darkness. While the romance could be stronger and the ending more fleshed out, the unique premise, engaging characters, and surprisingly well-developed villains make it a worthwhile dive. I'd give it a solid 4 out of 5 stars. Just be aware of the pacing issues towards the end.
