Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on There Was No Secret Organization to Fight with the World’s Darkness so I Made One (In Exasperation)
This web novel is definitely a unique experience, and I can see why it has such a mixed reception. It's a blend of genres that shouldn't work, yet somehow it manages to carve out its own niche. It's got action, comedy, fantasy, and even a slice of life feel, all wrapped up in a seinen package. It's safe to say that this is not your average story.
First Impressions
Initially, I was a bit put off by the amount of exposition. The first few chapters are heavy on world-building and internal monologues from the protagonist, Sango. It felt like a slow burn, and I was worried that the story would never really take off. However, I'm glad I stuck with it because the story really picks up once Sango decides to create his secret organization.
What Works Well
The humor is a major draw. It's often cringe-worthy and predictable, but in a way that makes you laugh anyway. The premise of an overpowered protagonist creating his own "World's Darkness" to fight is inherently funny, and the execution, while flawed, delivers on that promise. I also appreciate the logical approach to the superpowers. The author clearly put thought into how Sango's psychokinesis works, its limitations, and its applications. This adds a layer of realism to an otherwise fantastical story. The relationship between Sango and Kaburagi, the main heroine, is also refreshing. Their dynamic is well-developed, and they complement each other perfectly.
Areas of Concern
One of the biggest criticisms I've seen is the "tell, don't show" approach to storytelling. There's a lot of internal monologue and exposition, which can make the pacing feel slow and tedious at times. I also noticed that the plot can be predictable, relying on common shonen tropes. While this is part of the story's meta-narrative, it can also lead to a lack of surprises. Additionally, some readers found the protagonist's initial lack of motivation frustrating, as he seems to do nothing with his immense power for years.
Final Verdict
Overall, I enjoyed "There Was No Secret Organization to Fight with the World’s Darkness so I Made One (In Exasperation)." It's a flawed but ultimately entertaining story with a unique premise and a good sense of humor. If you're looking for a lighthearted read that doesn't take itself too seriously, this might be right up your alley. However, if you prefer fast-paced action and a more traditional narrative style, you might want to look elsewhere. I'd recommend giving it a try, but be prepared for a slow start and a healthy dose of chuunibyou.
