What’s Wrong with This Alpha?

What’s Wrong with This Alpha?

这个Alpha为何那样? · Original Chinese title

Also known as: 这个Alpha为何那样?

4.4 38 ratings
Completed chinese Web Novel

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Reviewed by Kana

Who it's for, and whether it holds up.

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The school setting here does something most ABO stories don't bother with: it actually feels like school. The friendships read as friendships, the humor lands because it comes from character rather than situation, and the author's eye for that specific register of adolescent intensity gives the whole thing a warmth that's hard to manufacture.

The two leads are the obvious reason to read this. The MC is labeled a school bully but is genuinely sweet, and his fixation on the ML is played for comedy in ways that don't make him annoying. The ML refuses the cold-and-distant archetype and goes full tease instead, which keeps the dynamic from calcifying into the usual push-pull. Their banter has actual chemistry.

What makes this more than a light romance is a significant structural twist: the MC was never transmigrated. The entire premise shifts when it becomes clear he was in a coma. This reframes the story's emotional core and adds real weight to what had seemed like lighter fare. Some readers felt the story's focus on the "real world" aftermath was thinner than it deserved, and that's a fair criticism. The system element, which appears periodically, is also underdeveloped and feels like a mechanic the story half-committed to.

The early plot has some inconsistencies, but the author works them into something intentional rather than leaving them as errors, which takes some skill.

At 4.4, this is one of the stronger entries at its rating. The characters are worth it even before the twist makes the story more interesting.

Synopsis

Duan Yi accidentally transmigrated to a parallel world, turning from an Alpha into an Omega, and even married his mortal enemy. Three years passed with two children, life bitter yet happy. Just as Duan Yi accepted this reality… He transmigrated back. Sitting in his high school classroom, Duan Yi: f*ck! When you send me back, at least remove the mark! *** Synopsis 2: Sheng Yunze felt Duan Yi was acting strange lately. Clearly an Alpha, yet carrying his own pheromones. And he secretly took advantage of him—stealing clothes and even calling him “husband”. What’s wrong with this Alpha? *** Synopsis 3: Duan Yi realized his cursed life wasn’t over yet. If he didn’t obtain Sheng Yunze’s pheromones soon, he’d die. *** Warning: The Alpha is a venomous tongue, ice-cold. AO story. The main character transmigrated back and became an Omega. System involved, but not a traditional one. Venomous, cold Alpha who likes to control x Optimistic Omega who gets beaten up but never gives up. Micro-science fiction elements.

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Language
chinese
Type
Web Novel
Status
Completed
Chapters
101 chapters
Original Publisher
jjwxc

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