Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on Immortal Mortal
"Immortal Mortal" promised a unique take on the xuanhuan genre, blending modern elements with ancient cultivation. After delving into what readers are saying, I've formed a nuanced opinion. It's a story with potential, but one that seems to stumble over its own feet in execution.
First Impressions
The initial chapters seem to be a point of contention. While some found them intriguing, others felt the plot veered into cliché territory too quickly. The setup, involving a mortal MC striving for immortality, is classic, but the execution appears to be divisive with many readers feeling that the plot devices used to create conflict felt forced and contrived.
What Works Well
Despite the criticisms, there are aspects that resonate with readers. The protagonist, for some, is a breath of fresh air. He's portrayed as intelligent and diligent, considering the pros and cons of his actions. Many appreciate the MC's gradual increase in strength, avoiding the instant power-up trope common in the genre. There is also praise for the world-building, with the world slowly expanding as the story progresses. Some also appreciate the slow burn nature of the romantic relationships.
Areas of Concern
However, a significant number of readers expressed disappointment with the story's direction. A recurring theme is the MC's tendency to needlessly antagonize others, even when it's detrimental to his own goals. This behavior contradicts the supposed intelligence of the character, leading to frustration. The plot also seems to fall into a repetitive cycle of conflict, escape, and power-up which some readers found tedious. Many readers were also very disappointed with the ending, describing it as rushed and unsatisfying, ultimately diminishing the value of the journey. The integration of modern technology also seems jarring to some, feeling out of place in the xianxia setting.
⚠️ Spoiler Warning
Some readers have expressed concerns regarding potential problematic tropes, drawing parallels to the author's previous work, "Gate of Good Fortune." These concerns include the repeated kidnapping of female characters and potentially darker themes.
Final Verdict
"Immortal Mortal" is a mixed bag. It presents a compelling premise with a potentially likable protagonist, but suffers from repetitive plotlines, questionable character decisions, and a disappointing ending. While some readers may find enjoyment in the world-building and gradual power progression, others may be turned off by the frustrating conflicts and lack of satisfying resolutions. Proceed with caution.
