Why Did the Gentle Holy Father Turn Dark?

Why Did the Gentle Holy Father Turn Dark?

溫柔聖父怎麽黑化了? · Original Chinese title

Also known as: 溫柔聖父怎麽黑化了?

4.4 76 ratings
Completed chinese Web Novel

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Reviewed by Kana

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The setup is already stranger than most: a transmigrator ends up as a supporting character in a campus romance, and the "villainous" second female lead can hear their internal monologue. That's not a premise that rights itself easily, but the story mostly handles it with more wit than you'd expect.

Zhu Mo is the center of gravity here. Cold, guarded, and carrying a difficult past, she uses the transmigrator's unwitting narration to rewrite her role in the story. Her relationship with Xu Shiruo, the outwardly gentle male lead, builds on mutual obsession rather than sweetness. The sexual tension is real, the dynamic is genuinely strange, and the story earns the darkness it keeps gesturing at, at least partially.

The role reversal, where Zhu Mo acts first and Xu Shiruo mirrors it later, is the best structural choice in the novel. It says more about both characters than pages of backstory would.

Where it falls short is in committing to its own premise. The yandere elements get introduced but not fully inhabited. The male lead also fades from the narrative at stretches, which is a problem in a story that depends on their dynamic for energy. Li Xin, the transmigrator, supplies the comedy and keeps the tone from going fully airless, which is useful.

A 4.4 feels about right. Genuinely interesting, a little undercooked in places, but it earns the obsession it's selling.

Synopsis

Zhu Mo, a wealthy young miss, suddenly gained the ability to hear the thoughts of her deskmate. To her shock, she discovered: ——Her deskmate was a transmigrator! This was an old-school campus romance novel. The male lead was her cold and aloof childhood friend, and the female protagonist was the new transfer student. As for her? She was the vicious supporting character! In the original storyline, she deeply loved the male lead and, out of jealousy towards the female protagonist, kidnapped her. In the end, she was abandoned by everyone and ended up in prison. Zhu Mo: ‘…?’ Zhu Mo, who had an almost obsessive love for ‘gentleness,’ quickly withdrew her favour for the male lead and turned her attention to the sunny female protagonist. When the female protagonist first entered their class and the only remaining seat was the seat next to the male lead, Zhu Mo stepped forward—— The horrified transmigrator: ‘What, is the supporting female character making her move already!?’ Zhu Mo grabbed the female protagonist’s wrist and said, “You can sit with me.” The transmigrator: ‘?’ When the poor female protagonist was mocked and bullied by the male lead’s followers at the elite school, Zhu Mo stepped forward with a cold expression—— The bully smirked. “Zhu Mo’s here, you’re done for!” Zhu Mo pushed the bully aside and shielded the female protagonist. “She’s under my protection.” The bully: ‘??’ Under the transmigrator’s suspicious gaze, Zhu Mo continued to act out of character. She took the male lead’s role and left him with nothing to do. Until the female protagonist invited her to study at her home, where Zhu Mo met the female protagonist’s older brother—— The third male lead of the novel. A holy father-like figure who was even gentler and kinder than the female protagonist! — The holy father-like older brother was pure and clean. He exuded a gentle aura from the inside out. Zhu Mo became infatuated with his gentleness and confessed her feelings to him, but was rejected. She tried to imprison him, but he forgave her. Zhu Mo felt ashamed and decided to let him go. However, when she was invited to his home for a gathering—— The gentle holy father-like man, with trembling fingers, locked the door. His amber eyes darkened with an inscrutable emotion… — The original storyline was destroyed completely, and Zhu Mo disappeared. The sunny female protagonist, the yandere male lead, and the transmigrator all suspected each other of hiding Zhu Mo. Meanwhile, the holy father-like older brother from the novel slowly tightened his embrace around Zhu Mo and sighed in her ear. “Are you thinking of leaving me?”

Details

Language
chinese
Type
Web Novel
Status
Completed
Chapters
61 chapters
Original Publisher
Unknown

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