Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on What’s Wrong With the Summoner Being a Shadow
"What’s Wrong With the Summoner Being a Shadow" definitely presents an intriguing premise, blending modern-day school life with a portal fantasy twist. The idea of students attending high school while simultaneously venturing into a JRPG-inspired world is certainly unique and grabbed my attention right away. However, after diving into the available chapters, I find myself a bit torn.
First Impressions
Initially, I was drawn to the potential of a loner protagonist navigating both the challenges of high school and the dangers of a fantasy world. The academy setting and the promise of summoning magic added to the allure. The early chapters did a decent job of setting up the premise, but I quickly found myself wanting more progression.
What Works Well
The novel shines in its portrayal of the protagonist's internal struggles. The author does a commendable job showcasing the mindset of someone who's been consistently bullied and ostracized. I appreciated the focus on character growth and the gradual development of relationships, particularly the slow-burn romance with the female lead. There's a certain warmth in seeing the protagonist slowly open up and connect with those around him, and the author really nails the loner's perspective.
Areas of Concern
However, the pacing is a significant issue. The slow progression of the plot can be frustrating. While character development is important, the story sometimes gets bogged down in the protagonist's internal monologue and past trauma. Some may find the main character's reactions and coping mechanisms a bit extreme, and the author's reliance on the same backstory elements repeatedly can become tiresome.
⚠️ Spoiler Warning
Several readers have pointed out specific plot points that might be considered spoilers. One involves the protagonist's difficulty in summoning and the reasons behind it, which some find melodramatic. Another deals with the protagonist's selective memory loss as a defense mechanism, which, while understandable, can feel repetitive and hinder the overall narrative.
Final Verdict
"What’s Wrong With the Summoner Being a Shadow" has the potential to be a truly compelling coming-of-age story within a fantasy setting. The unique premise and focus on character growth are definite strengths. However, the slow pacing and the protagonist's somewhat frustrating character traits may deter some readers. If you enjoy slow-burn stories with a heavy emphasis on character development and are willing to be patient with the plot, this novel might be worth a try. Otherwise, the slow progression and potentially frustrating protagonist might be a deal-breaker.
