Reviewed by Kana
Who it's for, and whether it holds up.
My Thoughts on Citadel for All: The Only Unit Angel at the Start of the Game
"Citadel for All" promised a thrilling kingdom-building adventure, but my experience was a bit of a mixed bag. The premise, where humans are transported to another world to become lords and fight for godhood, definitely grabbed my attention. However, the execution left something to be desired.
First Impressions
I was initially drawn in by the game-like elements and the idea of commanding powerful units. The initial setup, with everyone getting a random creature type to command, felt like it had potential for diverse strategies and underdog stories. The main character starting with Angels, the only divine unit, piqued my interest, but quickly became a point of contention.
What Works Well
I can see why some readers find this addictive. The core concept of building a citadel and commanding troops in a fantasy world is appealing. Some readers enjoy the OP main character trope, finding satisfaction in his effortless rise to power. I appreciate the potential for world-building and strategic gameplay. The unique premise is a breath of fresh air, and the minimal grammar mistakes are a plus.
Areas of Concern
The game balance is a major issue for me. The MC's starting advantage with Angels feels overwhelmingly unfair, diminishing the tension and challenge. It felt like the MC was so overpowered that there was no real sense of danger or struggle. The MC's personality is also a problem for many. I found him to be whiny, envious, and, at times, even unlikeable. His actions, such as exploiting the early game food market and ordering executions, made it hard to root for him. The repetitive writing style also detracted from my enjoyment. I found myself skimming large chunks of text that reiterated obvious points or overly praised the MC's angels.
⚠️ Spoiler Warning
Several reviewers have pointed out potentially significant plot points. Be aware that the following contains spoilers:
- The MC's angels employ brainwashing magic on the local population.
- The harem aspect is underdeveloped.
- The MC sleeps with his angel summons.
Final Verdict
While "Citadel for All" has an interesting premise and some addictive qualities, the significant balance issues, unlikeable MC, and repetitive writing ultimately made it a less enjoyable read for me. If you enjoy wish-fulfillment fantasies with an overwhelmingly powerful protagonist and are willing to overlook these flaws, you might find something to enjoy here. However, I recommend going in with tempered expectations.
