A Wife’s Cry

A Wife’s Cry

2.7 67 ratings
Completed filipino Web Novel

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Reviewed by Kana

Who it's for, and whether it holds up.

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My Thoughts on A Wife’s Cry

Okay, I dove into "A Wife's Cry" with a bit of trepidation, given the mixed reception. The tags alone – arranged marriage, abuse, and yandere male lead – made me buckle up for a potentially bumpy ride. And, well, it definitely was.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued by the premise of a modern-day arranged marriage gone wrong. The potential for exploring complex themes of love, duty, and personal agency was definitely there. However, as the story progressed, I found myself increasingly uncomfortable with the way certain themes were handled.

What Works Well

Honestly, it's tough to pinpoint significant strengths. There's a certain raw emotionality to the writing that pulls you in, even when you want to look away. The author clearly knows how to evoke strong feelings, even if those feelings are often anger, frustration, and sadness. Some readers might find the unflinching portrayal of a toxic relationship compelling, in a morbidly fascinating way. The cousin of the FL is a practical and strong headed character in the novel.

Areas of Concern

This is where things get dicey. The overwhelming sentiment I got from other readers is that the novel glorifies abuse. The relationship between Vanessa and Allen is portrayed as deeply unhealthy, with instances of physical and emotional abuse that are, frankly, disturbing. The female lead's tendency to blame herself for everything, even her husband's violent outbursts, is incredibly frustrating. The male lead's actions are often excused or justified, which I found problematic.

⚠️ Spoiler Warning

Okay, let's talk spoilers. It's hard to discuss the major issues without delving into specific plot points. The most egregious example is Allen killing their child. Even worse, he blames Vanessa for not telling him she was pregnant! In the epilogue, after a four-year time skip, Allen still doesn't feel remorse for killing his own child and it's implied that he "wins" her back through sex.

Final Verdict

Ultimately, "A Wife's Cry" is a difficult read. While some may find a twisted form of catharsis in its depiction of pain and suffering, I believe it falls short in its handling of sensitive topics. The glorification of abuse, the lack of meaningful character development, and the overall bleakness make it a story I can't recommend. If you're looking for a romance with a happy ending and healthy relationship dynamics, steer clear of this one.

Synopsis

The young and rich Vanessa Rio Perez glimmered with happiness as she dared to hope about starting her happily ever after once she marries her dream man, Allen Travis Fajardo. But she was wrong. Her arranged marriage with the airline heir didn’t work out. She woke up everyday to a marriage where abyss and emptiness held the reins. He grew more and more distant as every month passed by. That provoked her to commit one mistake – a mistake that welled his heart up with hate and shattered their marriage even more.

Details

Language
filipino
Type
Web Novel
Status
Completed
Chapters
40 chapters
Original Publisher
wattpad

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