My Story of Subjugating and Conquering Another World!

The Protagonist together with his whole school was transported to another world. When they were evaluated the protagonist was deemed as a weak character as he has only one skill. At their first expedition they were ambushed ,the Hero, which the student council president, used her skill [The Ruler] to control the protagonist together with his other classmates to act as a bait. In the midst, of the battle the protagonist was fatally wounded and fell into a cliff. While he is falling he vows that he will get his vengeance if given a choice, to the people that brought him to that point, suddenly a voice called out to him and offered him power. He is fused together with the voice that he heard and gained the skill [Absolute Obedience], a skill that has the ability to control a human or a demon for eternity. With that power he will have his vengeance and conquer the world.

Original Publisher

syosetu

Original Language

japanese

Type

Web Novel

## My Thoughts on My Story of Subjugating and Conquering Another World! ### First Impressions Okay, so I dove into "My Story of Subjugating and Conquering Another World!" with a healthy dose of isekai anticipation. The premise, a transported protagonist seeking revenge and then...conquering a world? Intriguing! The tags promised action, adventure, and some special abilities, which are always a plus in my book. I was ready for a wild ride. ### What Works Well The initial concept definitely has potential. The idea of a "mob protagonist" suddenly thrust into a fantasy world with unique abilities is a well-trodden path, but it can be executed brilliantly. The "strong to stronger" progression is always fun to watch, and the revenge plot provided some early motivation. I also appreciate that the author is actively working on the story; an ongoing series is always a good sign of dedication. ### Areas of Concern However, I did find myself stumbling over some aspects of the execution. The pacing felt a bit off at times. I noticed a tendency for detailed descriptions of things that didn't necessarily add to the story, almost like info-dumping that slowed down the momentum. This made it difficult to become fully invested in the protagonist's journey. The dialogue, both internal and external, occasionally felt a little stilted. It was hard to really connect with the main character or understand his motivations beyond the initial revenge plot. The shift from revenge to world domination felt a bit abrupt and lacked a strong foundation. Furthermore, the conflicts sometimes seemed to resolve too easily. This made the story feel less like a challenging adventure and more like a series of quickly overcome obstacles. A deeper exploration of the challenges and consequences of the protagonist's actions would add more depth and complexity to the narrative. ### Final Verdict "My Story of Subjugating and Conquering Another World!" has a promising core concept, but it needs some refinement to truly shine. Focusing on character development, creating a more natural flow of dialogue, and fleshing out the motivations of the protagonist would significantly enhance the reading experience. With some tweaks, this could be a really engaging isekai adventure. As it stands, I'd give it a cautious recommendation with the hope that the author will address these issues in future chapters.