Magic Apprentice

Legends speak of an era where demons and gods once lived with one another. Different in nature and identical in strength, the two co-existed peacefully together. That is, until the right to govern humanity divided them. The Glorious Crusade; as it came to be known, caused space and time to be divided and the world separated into differing realms. Human civilization rebuilt itself after thousands of years, and without the gods or demons, they became the masters of their world. Yet the gods and demons remain. Time and time again, the two have constantly attempted to breach the human world and regain supremacy— Elric, the son of a grocer, was born in such an era. Inept in the art of magic, Elric was somehow able to apprentice himself under the lecherous and rogue of a magus, Victor. Here lies the story of Elric, Belladonna, Jerry, and Kite. Together, the four embark on an adventure fraught with danger. Here, the Canon of Elric the Prophet will begin…

Original Publisher

17k

Original Language

chinese

Type

Web Novel

## My Thoughts on Magic Apprentice "Magic Apprentice" promised a fantasy world of sword and magic, but my experience was... complicated. With a 3.3/5 rating, I went in expecting a mixed bag, and that's precisely what I got. The premise itself is intriguing: a male protagonist navigating a world of wizards, kingdom building, and potentially, a harem. However, the execution left me with some serious reservations. ### First Impressions Initially, I was drawn in by the fantasy setting and the potential for adventure. The early chapters introduce Elric, our main character, and his journey into the world of magic. I was curious to see how he would develop his powers and navigate the challenges ahead. ### What Works Well Honestly, finding positives was a bit of a struggle. If I were to be pressed, the translation quality seems to be a strong point, as it allowed me to at least understand what was happening, even if I didn't particularly enjoy it. Also, I will admit that the world building is well thought out and it did keep me reading. ### Areas of Concern My biggest issue lies with the protagonist's treatment and his apparent lack of agency. I found it difficult to connect with Elric because he seemed to passively accept the constant abuse and ridicule he faced. It was disheartening to see him repeatedly demeaned by his "friends" and masters without any real pushback. The cross-dressing element felt like another layer of humiliation piled on top of an already downtrodden character. I kept hoping for some sort of catharsis, some moment where Elric would finally stand up for himself, but it never materialized. This lack of character development made it hard for me to invest in his journey. The plot, as well, felt somewhat thin. It lacked the compelling drive that would typically keep me engaged, and the absence of a clear antagonist made the story feel aimless at times. ### Final Verdict "Magic Apprentice" had potential, but the pervasive abuse and the protagonist's lack of agency ultimately detracted from my enjoyment. While the translation quality is commendable, I struggled to find redeeming qualities in the story itself. It's a novel I wouldn't personally recommend, but if you have a high tolerance for mistreatment and are looking for a unique take on the fantasy genre, it might be worth a try. Just be prepared for a potentially frustrating read.