Interested in the One-Eyed Female General So I Joined the White Wolf Knight Order, but It Turned into a Harem?!

―――The wind-manipulating female general Ortasia is an extremely cruel person. Just saying her name would cause even those from her own country to tremble in fear. Then came a day that the invincible Ortasia had to finally pay for her sins on. Her comrades, who were scared of even her war-mongering existence, set a trap for her. It was then that she lost her right eye. Barely escaping alive*, she escaped to a small cabin in the woods. Meeting the young lumberjack Shingen who lived there, she swore――― with that boy she would start a fierce storm to get revenge and take back the country――― Wanting to become a knight like the one he admired, the lumberjack joined her and learned that the majority of the White Wolf Order were actually women. And with that he came to this conclusion: “Hey, former commander! You acted really cool while you were explaining all of that but, really, you were just creating your own harem, weren’t you?!” And with that our serious-sounding, yet at the same time not-so-serious story begins!!

Original Publisher

syosetu

Original Language

japanese

Type

Web Novel

## My Thoughts on Interested in the One-Eyed Female General So I Joined the White Wolf Knight Order, but It Turned into a Harem?! Alright, let's dive into "Interested in the One-Eyed Female General So I Joined the White Wolf Knight Order, but It Turned into a Harem?!" Yes, the title is a mouthful, but is the story worth the effort of saying it? Here's my take. ### First Impressions The premise definitely grabbed my attention. A princess betrayed, a male protagonist joining a knight order, and a one-eyed female general? Intriguing! The "harem" part of the title felt a little less original, but I was hoping for a fresh spin on the trope. The initial chapters do a decent job of setting up the world and the political intrigue, but I did find myself wanting a bit more depth early on. ### What Works Well The setting and the characters definitely have a certain charm. The idea of a princess fighting to reclaim her throne is a classic, but the unique details, like the one-eyed general, give it a twist. I found the potential for political maneuvering and tactical warfare appealing. The world-building seems to be laying a foundation for something interesting, and the action sequences, when they happen, are engaging. I also appreciate that the female lead isn't just a damsel in distress; she's a capable warrior. ### Areas of Concern Unfortunately, there are some issues that held me back from fully enjoying the story. The pacing felt off at times, with too much focus on side characters and flashbacks that detracted from the main plot and the MC's development. I wanted to see more of the protagonist's perspective and his interactions with the female general. The plot felt simplistic and the characters had a tendency to reveal confidential information too easily, which strained my suspension of disbelief. ### Final Verdict "Interested in the One-Eyed Female General So I Joined the White Wolf Knight Order, but It Turned into a Harem?!" has potential, but it needs some refinement. The unique setting and characters offer a glimmer of hope, but the pacing issues and simplistic writing hold it back. It's not a terrible read, but it's not a must-read either. I'd say keep an eye on it, but don't go in expecting a masterpiece.