I Became an Immortal on Mortal Realm

Reincarnated as the son of the Duke in the Qi Dynasty, Fang Wang’s mind housed a Heavenly Palace, where his consciousness could enter to cultivate. He could practice any cultivation technique or secret art to great perfection, only emerging when it was truly perfect. No matter how long he spent in the Heavenly Palace, in reality, it was but a moment’s time. At the tender age of sixteen, Fang Wang stumbled upon the mythic realm of martial arts, unbeknownst to anyone else. However… One day, Fang Wang overheard whispers that Zhou Xue, the foster daughter of his uncle, had gone mad, prophesying doom for the Fang household. Curiosity piqued, Fang Wang stealthily approached Zhou Xue’s room, catching her muttering to herself, “Sigh, even as a former celestial dignitary, I find myself powerless to alter the fate of my family. Is the heavens playing tricks on me… If only I could rewind time by just one month…” A reincarnated celestial dignitary? Fang Wang’s perception shattered, a mix of shock and excitement washing over him. Who needs martial arts when you can ascend to immortality? Embarking on a journey spanning the vast landscapes, Fang Wang sought the one celestial art in the mortal realm capable of turning one into an immortal god.

Original Publisher

qidian

English Publisher

webnovel

Original Language

chinese

Type

Web Novel

## My Thoughts on I Became an Immortal on Mortal Realm ### First Impressions "I Became an Immortal on Mortal Realm" immediately grabbed my attention with its promise of a protagonist striving for immortality without the hassle of ascension. The premise felt fresh, especially the idea of a main character (MC) who's powerful but not annoyingly arrogant. Jumping into the story, I was eager to see how the author would balance cultivation, adventure, and the MC's unique goals. ### What Works Well The pacing is definitely a strong point. I found myself consistently engaged, with the story rarely dragging. The action sequences are well-written, and the cultivation aspects are detailed enough to be interesting without being overwhelming. The MC's personality also shines through. He's not a saint, but he's not needlessly cruel either. He navigates the world with a sense of pragmatism, making decisions that align with his goals and values. There's also a refreshing lack of typical xianxia clichés, like endless face-slapping or harems, which kept the narrative focused and enjoyable. I particularly appreciated how the author explores the MC's internal struggles, adding depth to his character beyond just raw power. ### Areas of Concern While I enjoyed the overall experience, the ending did feel a bit rushed. Some plot lines were left dangling, and the conclusion lacked the impact I was hoping for. It's a shame because the earlier parts of the novel were so well-paced and engaging. I also noticed that the later stages, when the MC becomes incredibly powerful, lose some of the initial excitement. It's a common issue in cultivation novels, but it's still worth noting that the early to mid-game is where this story truly shines. I also felt that there was a turn near the end that did not quite mesh with prior developments. ### Final Verdict Despite a slightly weaker ending, "I Became an Immortal on Mortal Realm" is a solid xianxia novel that I would recommend. The engaging plot, well-developed characters, and unique premise make it a worthwhile read. If you're looking for a cultivation story with a refreshing twist and a protagonist who isn't afraid to forge his own path, this novel is definitely worth checking out. I'm giving it a solid 4 out of 5 stars.