A Returning Journey

Okay then, this is actually a dark fic combining the tropes of mafia stories, modern rebirths, old cucumbers pretending to be young, younger tops, and more… (I can almost see the lightning… trembles) Ahem, but since I’m not your stereotypical author, our bottom is also not your stereotypical bottom, and our rebirth… It’s also not your stereotypical rebirth. We’ll only get into the rebirth part after the first volume finishes at around 40K words. Staring at the sky mournfully, I wonder if everyone can stay until then… Finally, a slow-burn as per usual.

Original Publisher

jjwxc

Original Language

chinese

Type

Web Novel

## My Thoughts on A Returning Journey "A Returning Journey" certainly grabbed my attention with its unique blend of genres. Action, romance, shounen ai, and supernatural elements? That's a bold combination, and I was eager to see how it all played out. ### First Impressions The premise is undeniably intriguing. We have An Yin Hu, a retired mobster trying to escape a stalker, who stumbles upon an ancient demon city. This leads to a series of events, including the death of a professor who, in turn, grants An Yin Hu eternal youth (or at least, a regression to his teenage years). He then decides to look after the professor's children, one of whom becomes the love interest. It's a wild ride from the get-go. ### What Works Well The sheer audacity of the plot is a major draw. The story isn't afraid to throw curveballs, shifting from a mafia setting to an archeological expedition and back again. I particularly enjoyed the initial arc involving the demon city and the professor. The tension and danger felt palpable, and the stakes were high. The idea of a hardened mobster suddenly becoming a protective guardian to a family is also quite compelling. I'm especially intrigued by the complex family dynamics and the underlying issues each of the professor's children are facing. The potential for intense, slow-burn romantic tension is definitely there. ### Areas of Concern One aspect that gave me pause was the initial setup of the romance. The fact that the protagonist seemed more invested in the professor than his son raised some questions for me. I hope the author can effectively develop the relationship between An Yin Hu and Mo Cong in a way that feels natural and believable, especially considering the age regression element. ### ⚠️ Spoiler Warning Okay, so this is where I have to address some plot points that could spoil the experience for new readers. I'm talking about the professor's death and the subsequent age regression of the main character. Also, the fact that Mo Cong, the professor's son, is the actual love interest. ### Final Verdict Despite a few reservations, "A Returning Journey" holds a lot of promise. The unique premise, blend of genres, and potential for deep character development make it a story worth checking out. I'm eager to see how the author navigates the complexities of the plot and delivers on the romantic tension. I'm definitely on board for the adventure and excited to see where this journey takes us.